We have received your request. We will call you if we can arrange a ticket for you. For an urgent requirement you can reach us at our call center.
I found this message very irritating due to two reasons. First, I don’t want to hear “ifs” and “buts” when I am approaching for a bus ticket. Second my travel requirement is urgent. In fact most of the cases it is and getting bus tickets (especially over the weekends) is pretty difficult. On top of all where is the call center number?
The mobile advertising or status messages should be short but convey proper information. Unlike the one mentioned above.